Mario TP10

Jongouk needed help with his essay again so I corrected his paper and gave him some feedback. I thought that his writing skills are improving quickly, so after correcting his essay I showed him some of the older essays I had corrected. We both noticed a difference in his writing. I told him that he seems more confident with writing because he is using more complex vocabulary and writing longer sentences. I also told him that his essays are more coherent than before, he said that it is becoming easier to write in English and that is why he can express himself better. I told him to go online and search for a topic he likes and then write about it. I thought it would be easier for Jongouk to write about something he likes.